How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

I%26#039;m a little cabbage,

But when I%26#039;m split in two,

My leaves I give to others,

But, my heart I give to you........

Isn%26#039;t that a bit sickly. How do you rate it, marks out of 10 ?

Feel free to share some of your favourite Valentines rhymns

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

*searches around wildly for a bucket*

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

lol oh ok then, i admit it, if someone had written it for me i%26#039;d have gone weak at the knees. Report It

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

nah its not very good id give it

2/10

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

cabbage never has a place in a love poem.

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

6

how about change the last %26quot;but%26quot; on the last line to %26quot;and%26quot; ? sounds better to me..

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

Great 1 for veggies

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

I agree with Drop The Phone. Cabbage in a Valentines poem? I just can%26#039;t take it seriously.

And what exactly does %26quot;giving leaves to others%26quot; mean? And then you deviate from the cabbage idea, saying %26quot;my heart I give to you%26quot; which is nice and all, but cabbages don%26#039;t have hearts.

It gets a 5 from me.

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

Na. 3/10 for effort.

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

aww thats cute 9/10

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

It%26#039;s quite cute however I%26#039;d take the %26quot;but%26quot; out of the 2nd sentence- too many %26quot;but%26quot;s!!!

P.S. X THE POISON X - cabbages DO have hearts, duh!!!

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

Roses are Red

Violets are blue

You wrote a poem

Pity it%26#039;s poo

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

I rate it 5, cabbage doesnt sound so sweet lol

Heres mine:

A Valentine Card $3.00

A Box of Chocolates $9.00

A Dozen Red Roses $30.00

You being my Valentine PRICELESS!!

Roses and chocolates everywhere

Flowers and cards here and there

My heart belongs to you

So keep it somewhere safe

Be Mine and I Will Be Yours......

Leave Me and I Will Sue You For All Your Worth

Today I like you

Tomorrow I%26#039;ll love you

Through the fights

Throughout the cold nights

I love you always and forever

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

thats a bit pants.

I can remember when i was younger i loved winding my friends up, so i sent a male friend a card that had a verse :

when i was on a mountain top i thought i saw you pass

but it only was a mountain goat sliding on its ***

also another one was

roses are red

their stems are green

my face may be funny

but yours is a scream

lol, i absolutely loved these.

How do you rate this Valentines Day poem ?

When I am lying alone in my bed

All sorts of thoughts come into my head

Like why do I love you as much as I do?

Then I know its because you are you!