Guess My Age for the Lyrics and Please Rate and Edit it:
Girl I need you Day and Night
Lifes Not The Same Without You
Everything would go Alright
As Long as You were By My Side
We%26#039;ll always be more than friends
I need you here until the end
You will always Be in my heart
They will never be apart
Your Eyes have me lost (Lost)
Stealing my heart (Heart)
I have my fingers Crossed
You would take my last breath (Breath)
Your Eyes have me lost (Lost)
Stealing my heart (Heart)
I have my fingers Crossed
You would take my last breath (Breath)
You are just mine (Mine)
Others say im dishonest
Can I hold you for one last time
I swear I wont break a promise (Promise)
Now, I sit on the Phone
Asking for you to come back home
What do I gotta do
To start something new
Girl I need you, and its true
When I see You, My heart blows away
This is nothing new
I think About You All Day
People Please Edit or Rate My Song Lyrics, And Please Tell Me The Right Genre Please?
I%26#039;m not being funny when i say that, based on these lyrics, i would guess your age to be about 13 and the genre of music would be %26quot;boy band%26quot;. These lyrics are really quite generic and they don%26#039;t seem to reflect any real personal emotion on your part at all. The rhymes are all very common and old, and literally anyone could%26#039;ve written this. Sorry, just being honest.
If you want to know if your lyrics are good find someone and read them one phrase of your lyrics and ask them if they know what you are trying to say. Next read them the next phrase and ask them if it works with the first phrase. You might want to tell them that it is a pome you are trying to write and not a song. It will be easier for them to give you an honest answer. Also try to read your lyrics to yourself as if it was the first time you read them. Would you like them if someone else wrote them.
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