Just a random thing I made up, and what would you rate it, Writers age and rating from: 1-5
Your Eyes got me lost
You took my heart, I have nothing left
You leaving me was the cost
It was like a love theft
You are just mine
I promise I wont break a promise
Can I hold you for one last time
Its all because your a godess.
What would you rate the starting lyrics to this song?
Pretty Good I thought.Maybe a 3.I have trouble putting exactly how I feel in writing but it seems like you got it down. I would say all you need is a catchy guitar riff in the beginning followed by a very rythmic baseline going into the lyrics then have a moment when the guitar comes back in right around godess right on a downbeat into a fast paced chorus.I dunno.Just something I guess.
What would you rate the starting lyrics to this song?
it was pretty good i would give it a 2 and a half its good and all but it all doesnt mix well together lik the end with the beg.
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