Please rate my song lyrics?

This one of my first attempt at lyrics writting, so please don%26#039;t be too harsh when you rate.

Constructive criticism would be helpful as well.

My friends find it corny, you%26#039;ll probably find it dull, but your comments can help me fix it and write more! Thank you and enjoy:

WHAT WE PULLED

You were fallen, I pulled you back up

You pulled me in with your smile of luck

You pushed me away from your heart

Warned me you were pulling my leg

Tonight will be the last of its kind

I held on while you pulled your shirt off,

I hung on, while you pulled at my hair,

To a dream you had pushed out of my mind

Pulling up my pants did I realize?

Tonight will be the last of its kind

I had let you pull at my heartstrings

Pull my phantom soul to pieces

Once more you were pushing me astray

Did you expect me to pull through?

Tonight will be the last of its kind

You pulled the plug of my heart, of my life

As if you had pulled off a big deal

Could I have pushed your memory away

Please rate my song lyrics?

Ignore your stupid friends, I%26#039;m not a critic but i can tell you it was excellent, i think it could be turned into a GREAT rock song.

Don%26#039;t stop writing songs, keep %26#039;em comin%26#039; bro!!

Please rate my song lyrics?

OMg,that%26#039;s pretty cool! I give a 7(1 out of10).