Rate This poem I made for science.?

Dont ask its very random and olny some things rym, so yea. rate it like a+, b-, c+ that kinda thing/..

Everyone has to have a heart,

Even if it is cold and dark,

It keeps the blood pumping,

So you can keep on jumping,

If there was no heart,

Then everything would be dark.

Rate This poem I made for science.?

I think you need to rhyme heart with something else besides dark. Using the same rhyme twice makes it look like you can%26#039;t think of a different rhyme. The first part about %26quot;cold and dark%26quot; doesn%26#039;t make sense to me.

Can you make a line that ends in %26quot;part%26quot; or %26quot;start%26quot; ?

If I were grading this, I%26#039;d be glad you did your homework, but I wouldn%26#039;t rate it higher than C or D because only the middle two lines make sense.

Rate This poem I made for science.?

C

Rate This poem I made for science.?

c

its not very scientific, if that%26#039;s wat ur aiming for...