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I am 11! Rate it from 1-10 and tell me what it needs to work on and etc! It has a hip-hop pop tune to it.

You broke what was left of me

You took my heart and hid it in your sleeve

I didn%26#039;t have time to flee

I felt as cold as ice

i thought you would be nice

but the promises you broke

filled me up with smoke

unable to know the way

should i stay here

and let this happen again

or should i leave now and see what is out there- ow

(Chorus) I feel broken, U have taken all my heart, u ripped me into shreds, I think u%26#039;ve lost ur head, is it true there is no more me and you? help me please, i don%26#039;t want to see, i want to believe that we can be but i know it%26#039;s not.

So i know that if i see you one more time

My heart will dissapeer

and i will be left with tears

oh baby

someone help me out here

i have such fears

no one to hold onto

no tightness

no warmth

Oh

chorus 2 times

END

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a 5 you said the same things twice

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nahh!

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On a scale of 1 to 10, I%26#039;d probably give it a 5.