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Friends make a dark day seem bright

They put a smile on your face

They are like the stars in the night

That are so full of wonder and grace

When you are around them

You be who you want to be

It fills your heart with so much joy and glee

That makes you proud to say,

閳ユ窔閳ユ獡 not ashamed to be me.閳?br>

Friends are like flowers, with a scent so sweet,

That keeps you anticipating for the next time you meet

When something goes wrong,

And you feel like you have been stabbed with a knife

Friends, they are the ones to bring back,

Laughter and joy back into your life

can you rate my poem on a scale from 1-10?

and what would be a suitable title for it?

star if u like the poem :D

Can you rate my poem?

wow that%26#039;s beautiful and 100% true as well, you%26#039;re a very skilled poetist, it gets 11/10!

the only tilte i can think of is friendship, or what you mean to me

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The poem is very nice....but lacks some consistancy in some places...its seems like you were just trying to rhyme instead of just writing....get what Im saying....I can be confusing at time....

On a scale from 1-10....I give it a 6.

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maby %26quot;friends light up my life%26quot;

i love this poem and out of 10 ill give you um.....................

1000/10!

keep writing poems cuz your really good!

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7/10

A point off for sounding beginner-ish/cliche, a point off for trying too hard to rhyme, a point off because the poem sort of wanders around the topic of friendship, rather than shooting it dead-on.

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Think about using phrases and descriptive words in your poetry that are unexpected. When reading your poem I find myself knowing what the next sentence is without having read it. It is better to leave the reader with a bit of a suprise.

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Very nice. I really like it. I would call it .....Thank you, Friend. Best of luck!! I give it a 10. I mean it. Otherwise I wouldn%26#039;t bother answering. Keep up the good work.

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id rate it 8/10.

title: Friends

ur so good for a first timer...keep it up..

i love it...!!

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wow i really like it .. i would give it a nine though.. because for a good poem to be..it has to have ryming words in the end of each sentence.... hope it helps

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The poem is very nice....but lacks some consistancy in some places it got a little bit confusing but still it was a great effort. and still i liked it very much.

On a scale from 1-10....I give it a 9.

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its a 10 i like it