How would you rate this poem?

I wrote this for my english class and submitted it to peotry.com. it was copyrighted and is being published in a book, and i was wondering what you thought of it. rate it on a scale of 1-10 and tell me what you think of it. it is a sonnet.

How shall I take your heart and make it mine?

I will love you now until forever.

Until the last stars lose their lustrous shine,

To declare my love I will endeavor.

The fathomless depths and beyond I閳ユ獟l go,

And bare my soul with God as my witness

All earthly possessions I shall forgo,

If only you could see my sweet fondness.

My only prayer, one request I will make,

Shed tender grace upon my hollow soul.

My eyes fall on yours and my heart doth quake

My beloved, my adored, make me whole.

The fire within has been quenched by your kiss

Looking back through our years I reminisce.

How would you rate this poem?

B-

Quite cute. Well done.

How would you rate this poem?

out of a scale thru 1 ta 10 10 being the best i%26#039;d give it a 9

How would you rate this poem?

I felt it lost rythym in the middle,, but it%26#039;s a cute poem.

How would you rate this poem?

ok. first, poetry.com is just a scam. ive finally learned that from having like, 7 poems %26quot;published%26quot;. but it is a good poem.

How would you rate this poem?

well it had meaning so on a scale of 1-10 i would give it 8.5

How would you rate this poem?

It is very good. Only those that are not very intelligent and low class when it comes to art (like folks that like rap) think every poem and every part of it must rhyme.

How would you rate this poem?

4 - Not trying to be mean but I think I%26#039;ll go throw up now. Sorry - (you asked).

How would you rate this poem?

I would give this poem a 10. It is so cute i love it wish i could write like that.

How would you rate this poem?

i give it 8.511111 out of ten, yes it was good but i scored it this much so i have got a better chance of getting 5 points over marhayy.

How would you rate this poem?

i give it a 8 1/2 it would of gotten better but im in a man hating mood o.0 so yea it very good ive got some on poetry.com look me up

Kirstie Wooten

How would you rate this poem?

I like it. It has a natural flow.