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OK, This is just something I wrote. Please rate it 1-100 and tell me 2 things: Your Favourite Part and What Part Really Stood Out To You. Here it is.....

True Happiness:

If you have ever had love in your life, then you know what type of feelings come with it. You know how it feels to have someone love you with all their heart. You know how it feels to climb into bed at night and know that the person you love with every fiber of your being is lying there next to you. You know the exquisite delight you feel when you look at them and the indescribable feeling that surges through your body when they speak.

You also probably know the feeling of heartbreak. You know the feeling of emptiness that intensifies until you can just barely take it. You have felt the feeling of never being able to love again and the feeling that you just weren鈥檛 good enough. You鈥檝e thought the thoughts of 鈥淚f someone as wonderful as them wouldn鈥檛 and didn鈥檛 love me, then why would anyone else?鈥?br>Please rate this and tell me if you like it...?

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1.Loving someone you can%26#039;t have

2.The fact that you took the time to write all that

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Nice :)

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ok

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Girl, if you are serious, this is not the forum, people here are generally not that serious, or good either, and will not give you what u are looking for, they will only give you a 3 second snap judgement

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Are you a bore?

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You have a great way with words! Keep writing whatever you do!

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i honestly think that deserves a 99 think that

what really stood out to me was when it said you know how it fells to have someone love with all their heart.

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Standup lady, life is a nice %26amp; sweet Battle, u will meet at it the bad %26amp; the good heart.

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beautiful

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i like that story or what ever your gonna call it .it has a lot of emotion in it.the way you felt when he was with you and the feeling you had when he left you. and as the saying goes better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all. however i am very sorry that he hurt you so badly. i believe there is more than one person for everyone . and i know that you will find someone to love that will love you back the same way, dont give up on love it will never give up on you, the hurt will go away sometimes slowly but it does go.

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It sounds great and very heart like,frist love is always the best

Thing that can ever happen to someone.I%26#039;m inlove and it feel%26#039;s so

Great and i get butterflies in my tummy but that%26#039;s a good thing

I am geting remarried in december of%26quot;2006%26quot; on christmasday.

I have someone that love%26#039;s me with all of his heart and soul plus

He love%26#039;s me for who I am on the inside not on the outside,and he lives with me we have our up%26#039;s and our down%26#039;s but very thing eles

Is great by the grace of god and the love of god too.

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hehehe it was cool. and trust me nuthing gets peeple mor interested than things and startings like

crisp, blue eyes were looking into the sky. He was lying down because u cant get the full view of the sky standing up painfully stretching back ur neck.

and stuff like that (i didnt write that sumone on this thing did they wrote it better though)

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it is falling:

being a poet myself i loved it, you gave true feelings into it and it is all so true. never dought the talent you have. yes some of your friends may be able to right poems. but until now your friends wont notice that maybe you are just as good as them. you never knew the talent you had, please continue writing poems . someday it will get you far. poetry is a art and not alot of people can do it but you ahev talent and like your friends you write about what you feel, so i am guessing you are in love or have true happiness. the part that stood out the most to me was when you talked about heartbreak thats so true. well i would give that a 98 please continue writing those lovely poems and posting them i would love reading your work.