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I am re-asking/ reposting this quesiton because I didn%26#039;t get a lot of responses last time. I am going to post one poem at a time.. so do you have any suggestions for this one? and... rate it on a scale of 1-10? thank you.

step carfully now

you can%26#039;t mend a forever broken heart

you show me how

but I was broken from the start

voices fading,

your touch dissolving,

my mind keeps revolving

around you.

no longer, I say.

but why should you have to pay?

Im sorry.

(this one kind of goes with the next one, I will post it in a new question though)

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I like it ... i write poems like this all the time!

it shouldnt matter wat other ppl think of ur poem as long as u write them and like them!

So u have brownie points u must like it since u wrote it ... and ilike it!

FAN!

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Wow, I really like this poem.