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Stone Step Stairs

The wind has finally caught up to me

The leaves are falling from their tree

The sun has gone and it閳ユ獨 hard to see

The angels are now circling down on me

They say it閳ユ獨 better if I closed my eyes

I know they wouldn閳ユ獩 tell me any lies

So I ask them why were they here

They point to the golden gate and disappear

I make my way to the gate only to find it locked

I try to break in but everything is blocked

This can閳ユ獩 be how it閳ユ獨 suppose to be

The angles never gave me the golden key

I keep telling myself to be strong as I fight back my tears

There is nowhere to go now but down the stone step stairs

I find my way to the bottom only to come face to face eye to eye

With my innermost darkest demon waiting for me inside

Refusing in and out and everything in between

My heart stops with everything I had ever seen

I hold out my hands and drop to my knees

Give me the key to the golden gate please

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Oh, I love it! it was a highlight of my day! Thank you!

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I think it is really good! 8.5/10!

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This is a great poem and the rhym scheme is good... I give you a SIX

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It was really nice.may be the key is in our own hands. we should find it to open the door. I really like this poem. would u please send me more poems?this is my email: sara1_rain@yahoo.com