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I want to be in your arms for the rest of my life

I want to be in your dreams at night

I want to be by your side forever and always

I want to be the love of your life

I want to be the one

That you will love

From forever and

From now on

I want to see your smile every day of my life

I want to see your face in the dawn

I want to see you dance in the light of the moon

I want to be the love of your life.

I want to be the one

That you will love

From forever and

From now on

I want to hear your heart beat for the rest of your life

I want to hear your breath go in and out

I want to hear your laugh greet the misty dusk

I want to be the love of your life

I want to be the one

That you will love

From forever and

From now on

Forever and ever

Every day

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Woah. I clicked on this by accident and was instantly captivated. Great imagery. Awesome.

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I want u to sing this song to me. lol

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I give you a solid 9.0

sincerely, poet man

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gees, needy aren%26#039;t you?

I want I want I want I want...

:P

Only kidding it is okay, a little cliche at times but still romantic...

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Very good, incredible. I%26#039;m sure it%26#039;ll sound mesmerising once you sing it.

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blah blah blah love love love cant live w/o you such n such

i%26#039;m in love too (i%26#039;m assuming u are, u%26#039;d have to be to write this) and there are a million songs like this and they all bore me to tears

jus bein honest

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No offence hon but it%26#039;s a little cliched... try to be original , use new word combinations, think up original metaphors, be quirky...this is good alright but bland too.