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I am re-asking/ reposting this quesiton because I didn%26#039;t get a lot of responses last time. I am going to post one poem at a time.. so do you have any suggestions for this one? and... rate it on a scale of 1-10? thank you.

step carfully now

you can%26#039;t mend a forever broken heart

you show me how

but I was broken from the start

voices fading,

your touch dissolving,

my mind keeps revolving

around you.

no longer, I say.

but why should you have to pay?

Im sorry.

(this one kind of goes with the next one, I will post it in a new question though)

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it is nice

but I am sure you know that P%26amp;S is mindless chatter and not many people will read it. I will make you a bet.

If you were to post a question asking say.....dog or cat you will get twice the response than your poems. It is sad but reality. If you take me up on the bet add me as a contact so I can see the results. it could actually be fun.

Good luck to you!

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that is really really good. did you think of it onur own?? wow!

TEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Please stop!

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I don%26#039;t know what you are really saying there! Are you apologizing for something you did.

Pay for what?

You lost me.

Don%26#039;t post again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

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i really like it! 10!!

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WOW omgsh- it%26#039;s like it was written for me!! it%26#039;s exactly how i feel! how did you know!?!?

10 !!!!!!!!!!!!!

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100000000000000000!!!!!! thatb is sooooo good! i wish i could do that!

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It%26#039;s a good poem, but the topic is worn out. Have people forgotten that there is more then life than the opposite sex? (or the same one if you prefer)

But it still is a 9

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omg i so love this it is sooo beautiful!!!!!

write more its awesome!

10!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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1. i hate poetry just say what%26#039;s on your mind don%26#039;t dance around your thoughts and get all full of yourself K.I.S.S.

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that was amazing!10!

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sounds like my crushed heart... bravo!

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oh my god its better than Robert Frost Edgar Allen Poe and even Dr.Susse put togter i give it a 10000000

its phenmonal better than a 10

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9+....Real Good....!!