Please Rate My Song Lyrics Out Of 10 with Honesty?

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Girl I need you day and night

Its just not the same without you

Im going out of mind

Love lasts forever

When I close my eyes

All I think of is you

I picture us together at the beachside (All Alone)

I don%26#039;t want this to be over

Without you I%26#039;m lonely

Your the lady that completes me

I know what I did was wrong

Lets forget the bad memories and start over

I want to restart this love life

So we can meet again in the next life

I will be the honest guy

You will be the same girl

In the past I have lied

I wont break another promise

Girl,I relize I was wrong

You were always right about me

Now, I sit on the Phone

Asking for you to come back home

What do I gotta do

To start something new

Girl I need you, and its true

When I see You, my heart blows away

There is nothing new

I just want to be with you

Please Rate My Song Lyrics Out Of 10 with Honesty?

its not good to put ur original lyrics on here someone might take them and make them their own but its a 7