this is a new peom of mine plz rate its about a best friend
Everyone should have
a friend like you
You are so much fun to be with
And you are such a good person
You crack me up with laughter
And touch my heart with your kindness
You have a wonderful ability
To know when to offer advice
And when to sit in quiet support
Time after time
You%26#039;ve come to my rescue
And brightend so many
Of my routine days
And time after time
I%26#039;ve realized how fortunate
I am that my life includes you
I really do believe that
Everybody should have a friend like you
But so far it looks like
You are one of a kind!
hope u liked it :D slamzzzzzzzz
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very touching.. i starred u
@noha
eh? fee eh? henla2eh bel kalam ..ehna lessa fee ramadan w ana mesh 3ayez abda2 ma3raka tanya :)
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i didn%26#039;t like it. there was nothing special ur words didn%26#039;t flow. try to make a couple of the words rhyme and use bigger vocabulary
go to this website: www.ghettosoul.com
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there is work in it, but nope...
if you like it its ok.... your friend will like it too..
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lol , begad to7fa , 20/10 !!!!
enty neseteeny ya nonna ??? ehe2 ehe2 !!!! lolz
kiddin !!!
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very good one
you make poems about your friend....
ya 7lawa ya ged3an
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Sweety.....7abebty.....
it%26#039;s really sooooooooo sweet ... wallahy
i%26#039;m not praising :)
btw, i hope to have a friend like that :)
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How Lucky you are Sweety%26#039;s friend,
To have such a poem from a lovely girl !!!
so pure and lovely cutie Sweety :-)
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of course I like it it is so nice I am sure that the one you write it for will love it ;D
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from my expriance of being a GREAT POET i can say that it is ok 6/10
hehheheheheheheh i am joking it is nice but has lack of rhyme bas
@last pharoh u know what make someone a poet akeed ~~~~~~(i dont know if this rule applies to all poets our most of them lolz)
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YOU R A GREAT POET
i looooooove the poem your friend is lucky because she has a friend like you she is very lucky like me coz you r my friend too
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theres alot of thombs down on all the people who hate the answers NEWAYS.... i thought you did a lovely job on it.. an i think your friend will love it!
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Very nice.
thanks for sharing.
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That is very nice 8/10
Sure your friend will appreciate it.
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