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Wednesday, October 28, 2009

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this is a new peom of mine plz rate its about a best friend



Everyone should have



a friend like you



You are so much fun to be with



And you are such a good person



You crack me up with laughter



And touch my heart with your kindness



You have a wonderful ability



To know when to offer advice



And when to sit in quiet support



Time after time



You%26#039;ve come to my rescue



And brightend so many



Of my routine days



And time after time



I%26#039;ve realized how fortunate



I am that my life includes you



I really do believe that



Everybody should have a friend like you



But so far it looks like



You are one of a kind!



hope u liked it :D slamzzzzzzzz



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very touching.. i starred u



@noha



eh? fee eh? henla2eh bel kalam ..ehna lessa fee ramadan w ana mesh 3ayez abda2 ma3raka tanya :)



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i didn%26#039;t like it. there was nothing special ur words didn%26#039;t flow. try to make a couple of the words rhyme and use bigger vocabulary



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there is work in it, but nope...



if you like it its ok.... your friend will like it too..



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lol , begad to7fa , 20/10 !!!!



enty neseteeny ya nonna ??? ehe2 ehe2 !!!! lolz



kiddin !!!



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very good one



you make poems about your friend....



ya 7lawa ya ged3an



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Sweety.....7abebty.....



it%26#039;s really sooooooooo sweet ... wallahy



i%26#039;m not praising :)



btw, i hope to have a friend like that :)



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How Lucky you are Sweety%26#039;s friend,



To have such a poem from a lovely girl !!!



so pure and lovely cutie Sweety :-)



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of course I like it it is so nice I am sure that the one you write it for will love it ;D



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from my expriance of being a GREAT POET i can say that it is ok 6/10



hehheheheheheheh i am joking it is nice but has lack of rhyme bas



@last pharoh u know what make someone a poet akeed ~~~~~~(i dont know if this rule applies to all poets our most of them lolz)



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YOU R A GREAT POET



i looooooove the poem your friend is lucky because she has a friend like you she is very lucky like me coz you r my friend too



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theres alot of thombs down on all the people who hate the answers NEWAYS.... i thought you did a lovely job on it.. an i think your friend will love it!



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Very nice.



thanks for sharing.



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That is very nice 8/10



Sure your friend will appreciate it.

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