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Love is something you cant see

But can be shown

Something you cant touch

But can be felt by the heart

Something that brings joy

But can also bring pain and sorrow

Something everyone wants

But is so hard to find

But once found you cant let go

rate my poem on a scale from 1-10

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Too me It makes sense on such a higher level. I love it too

much to put a number on it. Very heartfelt. I recently lost

someone very dear to me .

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It%26#039;s not bad. 6 out of ten. I think it just repeats a lot that has been in many, many other poems. If you wrote something more original I%26#039;d give it higher points because at least this poem isn%26#039;t preconceived rhyming sentences.

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Good story, but needs rhymes. Probably a 6, but possibly closer to a 10 when you allow some of the words to rhyme.

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5

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Your poem, is so heart warming.

like the pollen of a flower with bees swarming.

As the sun rises above the pedals of color

night turns to day, a day like no other.

A day that comes and goes before you know it

flowers grow like the words of a poet.

So, to rate this poem you share with me

I must give you a 6 plus 3.

A powerful 9 to you my friend

Continue to share your poems, TIL THE END.

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4.5 It%26#039;s good, but mothing special. I think rymes would make it corny, what is does need is more symbolism.

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i give you an 8.

Could you rate my poem and tell me what you think?

it seems to be telling more of a story just in general, like ur trying to explain love verbally. in writing, you have so much more time to think about what your trying to %26quot;say%26quot; and give your words the fluidity and power that enchants the reader.

rhyme doesnt necessarily make a poem, but your poem kind of lacks that power. i can see that you have meaning, but you need to express it more powerfully and make the reader really feel what your trying to convey.

i%26#039;d give it a 5, but then again im super critical (sorry!!!)