Ok i have another one for readers to rate...sorry im in a writing frenzy!! 5 for best 1 worst...and explain what i could impove (if needed)
What is love?
Staring out the window,
A soft hand touches my face,
He whispers soft words,and my heart begins to race,
I look over at the mist dripping down,
And watch as it drops to the ground,
Happy thoughts begin to form,
As a tear rolls down my cheek,
The words in his eyes, louder than if spoken,
He wonders why I cry,
I say to him with most passion,
I%26#039;m happy, I have you by my side.
If love is so grand, love is so great,
Why does God make us wait,Is it to make us strong?
To know what%26#039;s is right from wrong?I%26#039;ll tell you why,
It%26#039;s so we know what love is.
When you can look at your lover,that one soul mate,
And lift the world, and carry it%26#039;s wieght,
When you can truely say,You have no clue,
As to why you love them, You just do.
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that...is...beautiful! i give it a full on FIVE 555555! if it were possible and u asked for it, i would go up to ten!
dude, i%26#039;m listening to Cute is What we aim for%26#039;s Curse of Curves right now, %26amp; when i was reading this, everything went away....
i luv it. i luv writing...reading... and i luv this poem. beautiful.
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I think it%26#039;s pretty good.
3, the meter needs some work.
The rhythm of it.
Nice work:)
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very nice!
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omg! this poem is so beautiful.....ur expression is incredible. u r relly truly talented..i give this poem 5 outta 5 ...it sure deserves it...i like the way u make ur word flow....truly inspirational [if u can call it tht]
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