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She lost her smile a long time ago

her laughter replaced by tears

nobody knows the pain shes hiding

tears of yesterday haunt her

fears of tomorrow keep her from sleep

the only person who could bring a smile to her face

faded a long time ago

she hides her broken heart

almost as easy as she hides her scars

traces back to what used to make her smile

but that faded a long time ago

all she seems to do is cry her self to sleep

she wishes for all this to end

but when she wakes up she knows her wish hasn%26#039;t come true

she prays to God to give her the last ounce of strength

to make it though the day

her dreams are full of teenage kisses and suicidal dreams

she longs for someone to kiss her so she might not feel so dead inside

she hopes for somebody to stop this pain

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That was really good. I loved the descriptions.

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8.5 very good

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this is rely good.

way better then my pomes

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Make sure you copy write it cuz someone could take credit for it. Overall it was a really good poem! Im so in love with poetry,..and writing and everything so yeah good job :)

6.5/10

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That is really deep. I love poetry like this! I write poems like this too. I have not heard to many really really good poems but this is definatly one! Thank you for sharing it!

9.5/10

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Thats really beautiful. Very touching. From a 36 year old mom. It made me think very lovingly of my past. Nice job.

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I rly liked it...it was deep and just rly great job 9.5/10!!

I write poetry to but i suggest you copy write it so someone dont steal it....cuz u rly deserve the credit for it!