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i am trying to write my own little serious of stuff for this book im making. its not going to be famous or anything just a book to keep for myself and maybe some friends. so please rate the entries for my book on a scale from 1-10 ten being the best and blah blah blah

here they are:

When meeting someone of the opposite , you are usually found in awkward situations. Many draw conclusions to fast others don鈥檛. It all depends on the person. But when faced with your ex, you never know what will happen. Sometimes he ignores you sometimes he doesn鈥檛. And even sometimes it may seem as if he loves you again, or as he claims wanting to be 鈥渏ust friends鈥? But does just friends really mean just friends?

In the game of love, you must know what cards to put down. Putting down a heart will show you are ready for true commitment and ready to take it a step further. Putting down and ace shows you鈥檙e smart and like it play hard to get. But be wise in choosing your cards, because you never know what card the other is playing.

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I give it a 6; you need to work on your grammar, punctuation and spelling.

Other than that the theme of the %26quot;novel%26quot; sounds promising. The only thing that brought you down is that it sounds a little done-over. It%26#039;s witty and sincere but sounds like every other relationship novels on the shelves.

Key note: Anyone can write about relationships through thier own experience, but it takes a great writer to research and put themselves in someone else%26#039;s boots- be the audience: the divorcee and the dumped.

good luck to you! hope to read your novel soon :-)

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I really like them both. I love the deck of cards idea, that is really clever.

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2--Kind of obvious

2--Too many cliches...and the deck of card thing related to love has already been done.