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That one time.

You see the one you love with the one you hate

It brings tears to your eyes

And brings pain to your heart

It%26#039;s not something that just happens

It can only be destiny

Because that%26#039;s how it will all eventually turn out.

And until you learn to love again

You may not have that tear in your eye

But the crying won%26#039;t stop inside of you

You try and think of another plan

But there is no one else

The person you love will remain forever more

Though they%26#039;ll never notice you anyways

Learn to love again, learn...

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8.9! Great, flowing, alliteration, and an incredible message!

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9

it is really good

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id give it a 7 its pretty good but you mite want to be carefull of what you put up here ppl can steal your poem and use it in a contest or just at school.

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OMG I love this poem it is soooo great i actually brung pain to my heart i love it and i reward you a 10.0

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8 outa 10

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I really like this. I%26#039;d give it a 9. :)