Please Rate My Song Out Of 10 With Honesty!?

Im 15 years old, Pelase Edit and Rate With Honesty:

Girl I need you day and night

Its just not the same without you

Im going out of mind

Love lasts forever

When I close my eyes

All I think of is you

I picture us together at the beachside (All Alone)

I don%26#039;t want this to be over

Without you I%26#039;m lonely

Your the lady that completes me

I know what I did was wrong

Lets forget the bad memories and start over

I want to restart this love life

So we can meet again in the next life

I will be the honest guy

You will be the same girl

In the past I have lied

I wont break another promise

Girl,I relize I was wrong

You were always right about me

Now, I sit on the Phone

Asking for you to come back home

What do I gotta do

To start something new

Girl I need you, and its true

When I see You, my heart blows away

There is nothing new

I just want to be with you

Please Rate My Song Out Of 10 With Honesty!?

Awww is this a true emotion or just lyrics? I like it, what genre do you want the lyrics to be in? I would honestly rate it a 8 =).

Please Rate My Song Out Of 10 With Honesty!?

Thanx for choosing my answer as the best! I appreciate it! =). Report It