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Please Rate Out Of 10 and Edit A Little Bit? Im 15 Years Old, Person Most Honest Gets the Best Answer:

Girl I need you day and night

Its just not the same without you

Im going out of mind

Love lasts forever

When I close my eyes

All I think of is you

I picture us together at the beachside (All Alone)

I don%26#039;t want this to be over

Without you I%26#039;m lonely

Your the lady that completes me

I know what I did was wrong

Lets forget the bad memories and start over

I want to restart this love life

So we can meet again in the next life

I will be the honest guy

You will be the same girl

In the past I have lied

I wont break another promise

Girl,I relize I was wrong

You were always right about me

Now, I sit on the Phone

Asking for you to come back home

What do I gotta do

To start something new

Girl I need you, and its true

When I see You, my heart blows away

There is nothing new

I just want to be with you

Please Rate The Song Out Of 10?

Did the girl find out that the guy was gay, and then she left him? What about what the girl wants? This just sounds like another %26quot;I just can%26#039;t go on with out you%26quot; type song.

I have been listening to music for as long as I can remember, and I have been commenting on inner meanings of lyrics ever since I was a kid. This is just my own opinion, and I%26#039;m sorry its not what you were expecting.

On a good note however, I must give high marks to you for writing this song. You do have talent, and your song might need to be revised.

Hope this helps. Best of luck to you and as a song writer and a romancer!!!!

Please Rate The Song Out Of 10?

10, but I%26#039;d put I sit by the phone.

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Pretty good... 7out of 10

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id give it a 7 and

instead of

start over say start all over

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i like it! but in the beginning it just sounds like a regular love song with no problems, then when you get to the middle thats when the problems start...i think you should combine the problems and the guys love for this girl together...you know like, %26quot; i know what i did was wrong...but girl i need you day and night%26quot;....don%26#039;t make the problems sooo distant from the love..combine the two feelings.