Please Rate My Song Lyrics Out Of 10?

Please Rate Out Of 10 and Edit A Little Bit? Im 15 Years Old, PERSON MOST HONEST WILL Get the Best Answer:

Girl I need you day and night

Its just not the same without you

Im going out of mind

Love lasts forever

When I close my eyes

All I think of is you

I picture us together at the beachside (All Alone)

I don%26#039;t want this to be over

Without you I%26#039;m lonely

Your the lady that completes me

I know what I did was wrong

Lets forget the bad memories and start over

I want to restart this love life

So we can meet again in the next life

I will be the honest guy

You will be the same girl

In the past I have lied

I wont break another promise

Girl,I relize I was wrong

You were always right about me

Now, I sit on the Phone

Asking for you to come back home

What do I gotta do

To start something new

Girl I need you, and its true

When I see You, my heart blows away

There is nothing new

I just want to be with you

Please Rate My Song Lyrics Out Of 10?

its pretty good man good job. i give it an 8 just because no ones perfect and you can improve and also because their are many songs similar of what your lyrics mean.

Please Rate My Song Lyrics Out Of 10?

Pretty good. I would say an 8.

Please Rate My Song Lyrics Out Of 10?

Probablyyy a 7.

And please, hun, be careful about posting lyrics online, people might steal them.

Please Rate My Song Lyrics Out Of 10?

Aww I love that! I really honestly love it. I%26#039;ll be lookin for ya when you%26#039;re famous!! 閳?I%26#039;d give it an 8.

Please Rate My Song Lyrics Out Of 10?

pretty good not into love song type things...dont know who genre your goin for..im sure it could work with some pop or that piano stuff, i cant stand new music though ha..seems like theres alot of songs like yours out there. bur i give it a 7 because your 15, im 15 also..if that makes a difference.

Please Rate My Song Lyrics Out Of 10?

i like it.

i%26#039;ll give it 8.

i like this line%26quot;I want to restart this love life

So we can meet again in the next life%26quot;

yea. you should becareful when putting stuff up, people might steal it.

good job on the lyrics.

Please Rate My Song Lyrics Out Of 10?

About a 4. You definetley have talent...it just sounds like to many other songs you hear these days.

Please Rate My Song Lyrics Out Of 10?

Its kind of Fruty but i give it a 8.5