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Can you please read this and rate it out of 10. Its not exactly finished much and its really jumbled. =/ But is it any good?

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Pouring out your words, nothing left to speak,

the cries of rejection written on the walls

Shake it off your head doubting that

you%26#039;ll get there someday, someday

Sit on the grass, alone in innocence,

Hearing your own melody in your ears

You probably want it, you probably need it,

It must be the only thing you%26#039;ve ever wanted so badly,

And if only I could, I%26#039;d give you your chance

Don%26#039;t even remember, the looks they gave you,

The names they screamed to you,

The ones who said they loved you

Think about pleasing the people you don%26#039;t know

with every aching second,

they could turn their backs towards you

Your heart strung to your fingers,

Ripping up the idolizing spotlight,

You live through satisfying the life on the stage

And your never afraid to look out, and see what it thinks

Of where you%26#039;ve gotten, since you%26#039;ve never given up

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I like this, very good.

I agree very deep indeed.

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mmmmmm.......i like......8.5/10......... my interperatation is about putting on a show in life. am i right????.......very deep

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I%26#039;d say probably 6/10 now just because some of the stanzas need to be switched around a little bit. Other than that it%26#039;s really good try switching 2 and 4. Good luck.

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It%26#039;s good I like it.

about 7/10.

Some might say to use more rhymes, but I have written some poems that I never rhymed anything.

Deep indeed....