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I woke with my heart beating faster than ever, my forehead drenched in cold sweat. Taking a cusory glance at the clock, the blood red numbers glared at me, telling me that I had only slept for three hours- yet again. I hav had the same nightmare for several nights, but they only get worse every time. Somehow, I feel that my nightmares are a warning. If my logic is correct, I won%26#039;t have much longer to live. Maybe even less than a year..

thats just the first paragraph.. does it seem ok? plz rate from 1-10 and give advice on how to make it better.. thanx!

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A good 7. It does need some work. The connection between the nightmares and the person%26#039;s belief they have a year or less to live is very weak. There is nothing to support that - so I cannot call it %26quot;logic%26quot;.

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Wheres the question on the link?Oh and by that info its a 10!

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it sounds really good....like a 7.

but, it sounds like a lot of other horror stories.

so i%26#039;m curious where your going with the story.

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very good an 8....keeps me waiting for you to tell me what the nightmare was...which is a good thing

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Its pretty interesting. the reader will definetally want to read more. 8

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Keep it current, and paced.

Like:

I awoke -heart beating faster than ever, my forehead drenched in cold sweat. The blood red digits on my alarm clock taunt me in a familiar way -only three hours sleep...again. And the nightmare, the one that has haunted be so often, becomes more vivid, real; reveling more of the horror that I fear awaits me. It tells me {i}One year, thats all you have left.{I}

Oh yes, I like where you are going with it.

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Nice. 9

Your description flows with ease.