Please Rate My Song Out Of 10 And Edit My Song A Little Bit?

Please Rate Out Of 10, Im 15 Years Old:

Girl I need you Day and Night

Its Just Not The Same Without You

Im going out of mind

Love lasts forever

When I close My Eyes

All I think Of Is You

I Picture Us Together At The BeachSide (All Alone)

I don%26#039;t want this to be over

Without You Im Lonely

Your the lady that completes me

I know what I did was wrong

Lets Forget the memories and start over

I want to restart this love life

So We Can Meet Again in the next life

I will be the honest guy

You will be the same girl

In the past I have lied

I wont Break Another Promise

Girl,I relized I was wrong

You were always right about me

Now, I sit on the Phone

Asking for you to come back home

What do I gotta do

To start something new

Girl I need you, and its true

When I see You, My heart blows away

There is nothing new

I just want to be with you

Please Rate My Song Out Of 10 And Edit My Song A Little Bit?

It%26#039;s little long and I can%26#039;t seem to find the chorus.